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Friday, May 17, 2019

upskilled the sentence

WALT: upskilled our sentences

1.the house stood in the woods
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Sadly, An old lonely abandoned  mansion stood in  the middle of an haunted,soggy lake until a ginormous wrecking ball came and happily  busted it down.

REFLECTION: I had no I dear what to do until one of my friends said we have to put elaboration into the sentence on the whiteboard.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Serenade. Room 1 read your up skilled sentence and we like the adjectives and adverb that you chose to use. Well done.

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