One night there was a lady and a man. The lady's name was Jamie and the husband name was could Leon. It was a really stormy night and everyone was asleep. Then the phone rang in the middle of the night. Jamie woke up and asked Leon to grab it, But Leon was asleep. Jamie grabbed it when she answered it, it was Leon on the phone. He said”Jamie can you come and unlock the door please? Jamie dropped the phone but Leon kept saying saying “Jamie”.So she picked up the phone again.She said”if you're outside then who’s next to me?.Leon got scared “check!” Jamie reached her hand over and the person next to her was awake. He had freaky eyes,yuck teeth it looked like a mummy. Then Jamie touched him then the mummy turned around and Jamie started to scream.
By serenade WALT: We are learning to write scary stories.
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hi its me charlize i love your story and the part about the mummy was amazing. Very descripive and cool byeeee
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ReplyDeleteThat was scary serenade good job keep it up!.
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